The first detail I wanted to add was a tagline which was 'Top beats each week', I chose this particular tagline because it rhymed slightly and yet it was still short enough to get the point across. Making it follow the same colour scheme of the title made it obvious to the viewer that they needed to be read together. The outline of the silver makes it stand out from the background but it is subtle enough for the sell lines to stand out.
Secondly, I changed the quote of the artist from 'was the golden boy' to 'the golden boy' because before the wording made it seem as if the person had been cut of mid sentence. Whereas now, it is just made verbs that suggest he is a golden boy, however when they do read the article they will realise.
Next, I altered the main story line because 'who's laughing now' was misleading because the viewer may take it to another account. Therefore changing it to 'break through' implies an artist is trying to break through the music industry. Or maybe being the main story is a break through.
Lastly, I added a barcode and price to the bottom right of the page to make it more authentic and this therefore makes my magazine complete. My final product has improved a lot and more elements have been included and the whole page is filled making it an interesting music filled magazine.
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